Freyr Illim Grey [FIN]

[pharos]

MAIN USERNAME:
Song

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CHARACTER NAME:
Freyr Illim Grey

RACE:
Human

CLASS:
Exorcist Agent//Golem Engineer

ADVANCED CLASS:
n/a

AGE:
Seventeen

GENDER:
Male

APPEARANCE:
[X]
The first thing you'll notice about Freyer is that he's short for his age. At seventeen and only at 5'4 he is quite small. His skin is fair, and his eyes are a dark honey amber almost matching his hair color which is a light blond. His hair is tied in a short braid as his bangs hang over his face. He has a scar from where the surgery was made on his left shoulder but other than that's practically blemish free.

For his missions Freyr wears a basic "military" style outfit. The uniform is all blue with golden linings along it. Under neath it he wears a black wife beater. The pants match the color of the jacket with the same golden linings. His shoes are brown combat boots to finish it off. As for casual wear, Freyr wears a black wife beater with a black vest over top, a red coat covers his body made out of light breathable material. His pants are black and leather and his shoes are black combat boots. On his left hand is a white glove to cover his metal arm as well as his right arm to keep up the appearance of normalcy.
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CURRENT PARTNER(S):

WEAPON FORM(S):

WITCH ANIMA:

MADNESS THEME:

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ABILITIES:

ABILITY NAME: Advanced Physical Conditioning

TYPE: Passive

STRENGTH: Average

KEYWORDS: improved strength, improved speed

DESCRIPTION:
Due to years of training Freyr has gained a amazing skill in speed and strength above the human peak. He's flexible and capable of doing some amazing stunts, such as vaults, frontflips, backflips, and other such maneuvers with ease.

EQUIPMENT:

EQUIPMENT NAME: Metal Arm

TYPE: Item/Weapon(?)

STRENGTH: Average

DESCRIPTION: Freyr's metal arm he had attached to him after losing his human arm to a Kishin attack. It functions just like a real arm minus the feeling of a real arm.

EQUIPMENT NAME: Renegade

TYPE: Custom Bazooka

STRENGTH: Average

DESCRIPTION:
Freyr's custom Bazooka, it's a standard RPG with a bayonet at the top front. It's gun metal gray in color with the words in bold white letters "Trust & Betrayal" along both sides of the length of the weapon. It shoots off standard RPG rocket shells which are custom made to harm and possibly kill Kishin.
EQUIPMENT NAME: Exodus Rifle

TYPE: Weapon

STRENGTH: Average

DESCRIPTION:
Freyr's standard Exodus Rifle.

EQUIPMENT NAME: Desert Eagle, Exorcist Issue

TYPE: Weapon

STRENGTH: Average

DESCRIPTION:
Freyr's standard Desert Eagle.

MINIONS:

MINION NAME: Al

GROUP?: ---

RANK: B

DESCRIPTION:
Al is a huge construct. Made of rock with slabs of steel embedded on it's chest, arms, legs, hands and feet it's an opposing creature. It stands about nine and half inches in height with a more muscular build compared to a more rotund golem. It's head is covered with a metal helm as it's bright red eyes stare blankly through the darkness. It's seen carrying a huge hatchet for combat which is even more scary.

ABILITIES & EQUIPMENT:
Al is equipped with a large steel hatchet. It's about five feet in length and weighs around one hundred pounds. It's pure steel wrapped in cloth bandages, giving it an eerie appearance. The blade it's self is four inches long with a chipped surface.

Weapon Strength: Average

[/i]: Al's Toughness

TYPE: Passive

STRENGTH: Average

KEYWORDS: tough skin, brute strength

DESCRIPTION:
Al's Toughness: Being made of pure rock and metal, Al is nearly impervious to physical and ballistic attacks. Sure he can be taken down with enough hits. But it'll take something akin to a RPG or some sort of bomb. Most bullets usually just chip away at his hard "skin" which still gives it time to smash the attacker into the ground.

Arm Smash: Al can use his large fists to smash enemies into the ground. Unprotected beings will find themselves injured or thrown across the area from the sheer strength of the attack. Best to keep yourself at a distance.
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VEHICLES:

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LOYALTY:
Exorcists Organization

KEY ATTRIBUTES:

LIKES
Al
His Mom
Bitter Foods
Spicy Foods
Summer
Tofu
Soy Bean Products
Vegetables

DISLIKES
Sour foods
Sweet foods
Normal Dairies
Meat
Candy
Cats
Kishin
Witches

STRENGTHS
Strong (Physically)
Agile
Quick-witted

WEAKNESSES
Has no defense against Magic
No defense against Madness
Uncooperative
Predictable

PERSONALITY:

The first thing you'll realize about Freyr (other than his height) is his attitude. Blunt and sarcastic he comes off as rude most of the time. As though lacking manners when it comes to authority figures. Which isn't oo far from the truth. He's a rebel in a way, he hates listening to those who think they're "all knowing" and tends to fly off the handle when provoked. His temper is usually on a hair trigger, the slightest of comments may set him off if he takes it the wrong way. Though he isn't a complete jerkass. He has a good heart as he truly cares about those around him. When you get past his rude behavior you get a generous likeable teen who is smarter than he acts. He's a good kid, just has a problem with authority, doing things his way, and being wrong. Other than that he's a-ok.

HISTORY:

Born in America, but raised in the Central Asia. Freyr was raised by his single mother who was left by her husband after Freyr was born. The man apparently didn't want the responsibility of a child and left her alone to raise her son on her own. His mother who was left in the middle east on a trip was stuck there due to her husband's abandonment.

Growing up in Asia was difficult seeing as they lived in China they were pretty poor with barely anyway to get the things they wanted let alone needed. It was when Freyr was eight that he found a book on golem constructing. It was in a dusty old shop in his town and all in Chinese but he was fascinated by it. He ended up spending weeks reading it until he got an idea to make one on his own. He knew the streets were dangerous and having a golem could protect him and his mom better. With that thought driving him he got to work.

He spent the better of three years working on the golem, contently consulting the book for anything he missed. When three years went by he had made the finishing touches on the golem. He presented it to his mom who was scared at first but soon after gotten used to the golem in which Freyr named "Al". It was one day when Freyr told Al to watch his mom while he went out, when he was attacked by a Kishin Egg who managed to escape the local meisters around the place.

The Exorcists were just setting up base there so they had no time to check out the area. Cutting the story short- Freyr tried to defend himself only to lose his arm in the process. Al who felt his creator in danger (Due to the unique magical addition Freyr added to Al in order to sense when he was in danger) rushed to his rescue taking down the Kishin Egg and fleeing with Freyr to get healed. A few months later Freyr recovered after a successful surgery giving him a prosthetic metal arm.

The exorcists who managed to catch wind of his tale became interested and asked to recruit him to their cause. Not wanting anyone else suffer his pain and wanting to get out of the the debt they had to pay for the surgery, he agreed. The next thing he and his mother knew they were being moved back to America where he began his training. With his mom in a nice cozy home in the city not too far from the base, Freyr began to understand what he was fighting for. Now three years later at seventeen he's more than ready to protect humanity.

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[Admin Roc]

Alright, let's get this started... *cracks knuckles*

Now, normally I'm not big on direct copying of an independent anime or manga character's appearance for profile purposes. However, seeing as there's no rule against it, that boils down to a matter of personal preference.

That, and you make it look good.

Moving on...

Equipment. No problems here, though how exactly the "standard" shells are "customized" to harm a Kishin is something I'd like a tiny bit more detail on. Something simple -- like a micro EM warhead on each round capable of disrupting a living body's bioelectricity / brain waves (or deep-frying a computer) -- would do. Just an idea off the cuff there.

Also, keep in mind that the standard-issue Exodus rifle and Desert Eagle (see common purchases) are also available to you by default. So yeah, firepower.

Minions. If possible, do a quick Equipment workup for Al's axe -- doesn't have to be anything fancy. As a shortcut, just include the weapon's Strength at the end of the description and we'll call it good enough.

Strengths / Weaknesses. I'd like to see these a bit more balanced out in terms of combat. Though 'reckless' can influence combat it isn't necessarily a weakness so much as a personality trait. To balance out his strength, agility, and quick-wittedness -- his overall nature as a soldier -- something such as "no defense against magic / madness / soul wavelengths" would work well. This weakness, like all weaknesses, can later be compensated for with Point Shop purchases of extra Abilities, Equipment, etc.

History. Okay, got a few minor issues here.

The first sentence says he grew up in the Middle East... then the second sentence says China. Those are nowhere near one another, so if his mother could've gotten from the Middle East to central Asia on her own she almost certainly could've made it back to the states.

Now, you mention him getting a metal arm in his history. That merits an Equipment writeup, even if it grants him nothing more than normal human strength.

There's also a mention of Al "sensing" his master was in danger. A quick mention about this connection between them in Al's writeup should suffice.

Other than that, everything looks good.


Now, I do have one condition to Freyr's approval. This profile is close enough to Ed that it could be considered as an AU Canon character. In the event that someone applies for an AU Edward Elric you and I will need to work out a way that this character can be reworked to be less like Ed (and minion Al less like Alphonse) -- either that, or once you have the appropriate Member Rank you can just go ahead and secure AU Ed so there's no longer an issue. Sound okay?

[pharos]

Lol yeah I'm terrible with Geography XD I thought China was in the Middle East x.x

Anyway fixed~

I couldn't think of a better explanation for Al's sensing so I solved it like everything else in supernatural fiction- MAGIC! /shotshotshot

[Admin Roc]

Well, golems are magical constructs (usually) so yeah, that works. ^_^;;

PROFILE APPROVED

(Also, I just put up a Mission that you might be interested in.)