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Post by cirrus on Aug 6, 2011 16:28:49 GMT -5
ABILITY NAME: Fourth Prong
STRENGTH: Average
KEYWORDS: soul wavelength, laser, anti-insanity
DESCRIPTION:
The Trishula signifies harmony; the three prongs of the trident representing the mind, body and soul. In tandem with Shibusen's motto -- a sound soul dwells within a sound mind and a sound body -- the 'Fourth Prong' technique calls upon all three, manifesting itself in a beam of light that bestows harmony. Being born from the Trishula and the attributed Bright Soul, the beam is only truly effective against the inharmonious such as kishins, and does less damage to normal and 'good' people. The attack manifests itself as a moderately potent beam of light, not dissimilar to a laser. It has the power to burn flesh at this level. Seeing as it's power draws from the three key parts of the being, the Fourth Prong drains a lot of energy from James; he can only use it sporadically. |
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Post by Rocton on Aug 31, 2011 17:57:16 GMT -5
Tagged for Review (I'm new work with me here Cirrus)
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Post by Rocton on Aug 31, 2011 18:49:40 GMT -5
Alright, after our discussion in the C-box, this seems to be good.
I've never really liked "time limits" cause that seems to be non conducive to character growth (what if he gets strong enough so that he can use it twice or really comes into a situation where he needs that second shot and get just enough energy to do it) so instead of "once a day" edit in "is extremely exhaustive" or simply "drains a lot of energy" and use it within those bounds you should be good.
After you make that simple change, this is considered approved. Since I'm a new mod though, consider this ability open to contention from an admin, though that shouldn't be necessary.
Approved
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