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Self-Run Missions [Review Thread] « Thread Started on Jan 18, 2012, 10:41pm »
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SRM LINK: (Link to your Self-Run Mission) Desired Rewards: (List the rewards you're requesting for the Mission. For items other than Points provide the FULL write-up. If different characters are requesting different rewards be sure to make clear who wants what. This is no guarantee of what you'll get -- staff will determine appropriate rewards based on the quality, length, effort, and creativity of the SRM.)
SRM LINK: Traitors Desired Rewards: Depending on admin decision whether it qualifies as level 2 or 3... I would expect 25 or 50 points (Points reduced because its a SRM) at least...
But if I do good enough of an effort... I think I want a piece of equipment after what happened... However I'm rewarded is up to you guys. I'm just giving you some ideas... As stated before in the rules, I guess...
SRM LINK: Traitors Desired Rewards: Depending on admin decision whether it qualifies as level 2 or 3... I would expect 25 or 50 points (Points reduced because its a SRM) at least...
But if I do good enough of an effort... I think I want a piece of equipment after what happened... However I'm rewarded is up to you guys. I'm just giving you some ideas... As stated before in the rules, I guess...
I think this is a good piece, but, to be honest, it is only what I expect from you, Sai XD I get a very strong Type-Moon feel from your writing. Me lieks.
Re: Self-Run Missions [Review Thread] « Reply #5 on Aug 10, 2012, 4:04pm »
For the Demon Fisher mission:
Tokoz gets 1 soul and 50 points
Tehinferno gets 50 points
Sai gets 50 points
NOTE:
One thing I noted throughout the mission thread was that Tokoz was doing most of the plot progression. Although I still gave you full points for participation, I'd like for you guys to keep in mind that a SRM is not simply just your thread partner being the unofficial DM. Everyone should be contributing equally in plot progression and when it's the time, the Big Bad fight. If you feel unsure or uncomfortable with taking control of an NPC or having the Big Bad react in such and such ways, communicate with your thread partners about it. SRMs are supposed to be stories that you create together, so communication IC and OOC is key to having a good story.
Also, although not every Kishin fight has to be a long, drawn out ordeal, it should always consist of more than BONK and the Kishin falling dead immediately. Again, the challenge you have been given with a SRM is to write out a satisfying story, and since one of the major points of a mission is fighting a Kishin, the boss battle is important. You may find it challenging to write both your enemy's attack, your reaction to it, and then your enemy's reaction to that, but here is where cooperation with your thread partners comes in. Coordinate amongst one another IC and OOC what you are going to do, and that's how you get a story that's well written.
These are just two important things to keep in mind on the next SRMs that you do.
SRM LINK:The Fucking Slasher Desired Rewards: 1 Soul + 25 points, due to it being a SRM
I award you 1 soul, and an additional 75 points (bringing it to 100 points total).
The dark humor was very entertaining, and you brought in all the elements: exposition of the Kishin in action, Rick interacting with the locals to find out what's going on, a fight sequence that took advantage of NPCs and the environment around them. Well-written SRM, and something I would not hesitate to show as an example of how to go about doing one.
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